We used this experience to write recounts in class. Here are the criteria we used:
Title - Cross Country
Introduction:
Who - Makaraka School
What - Cross Country
When - Last week. On Wednesday. Yesterday.
Where - Sam's house/ farm/ property. The Matthew's
How - By bus
Paragraph 1:
First we...
- tour, walkthrough
Paragraph 2:
Then we...
- getting ready for the race
Paragraph 3:
After that we...
- Tell us about the race...
Paragraph 4:
In the end...
- The finish
- Your placing
- How you felt?
- Then what?
We will use describing words and phrases to help the reader really understand what the day and experience was like. Here are some ideas we came up with...
- felt like jelly
- ache
- legs pumping
- heart pounding through my chest
- encouraging
- pipped
We hope you enjoy the recounts that our students have shared.